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A revised version of Xiao Long Nv. Hopefully this one this better than the last.. ^^;

Edit: Haha, whoops, forgot to edit the description after resubmitting the picture. xD Anyway, I fixed some of the things mentioned in the comments... I couldn't fix her "bendy straws" though, since I am not very good with hands. @_@ I put the outlines back, just changed the layer to "Overlay" so it wouldn't be solid black lines... I also decided that the last background was too bright, and made it all hyper, so I desaturated a bit... Same with her lips... Took away the "line" between her upper and lower lip too, but not sure if it's visible... Err....what else...? I think that's all, for now. O_o

Edit 2: Fixed her face a bit more... She should look prettier than before, although I am not too sure... ^^;

Edit 3: Changed her hair a bit, with the help of ~CinnamonSin. =P Probably overdid it a bit, but... heh...

Okay, you know what...? Enough of this... IT'S NOT A KIMONO! The belts for kimonos are higher up, closer to her chest and there is usually a big bow in the back. (Also, I've noticed that kimonos tend to make women have a flat chest, although I am not sure if this is true...)

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:iconphoenixiared:
oh~~ i like her!! Do you like the story? I absolutely love it. I have one too. did a long time ago so it's not very good you can see it here [link] I plan to do another one :D hopefully soon! :)

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:iconsakura13:
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:iconphoenixiared:
:confused: that's weird :P try this [link] ? sorry about that :giggle:

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:iconisidora:
She looks just like an angel! I love it! :clap:

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I am an artist who mixes sadness :blackrose: with beauty :rose:
:iconmadeofglass13:
nice, gives of a kind of "dreamy" look with all its soft edges

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:iconsakura13:
Thanks for the fav! ^___^

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:iconsakura13:
Pweettty... ^___^ I like the texture of his clothing. =D The white hair is a nice touch as well. =P

Did you see the series? (actually, there are two versions, but did you see either one?)

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:iconquaskers:
ohh i really love it ... must fav.. ^_^

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My boots keep america running.
I love you
whether you love me or not
I have lost brothers
friends
and a lover.
Don't tell me this isn't my battle
:iconaralin:
I really like it! This one has more face variation. The hair is even more pretty than usual! ^_^
:iconxero1:
oh the eyes. my oh my. you have no idea how much i love brown eyes. oh yes the hair is creative to. *stares at eyes agian* i'll be here a moment if you don't mind.

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i am nothing... who are you?

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